Pitch Your Movie! Novroz’s “Sunset Mystery”
Novroz from Novroz’s Favorite Things is pitching her movie today in our month long blogathon (Check the schedule) following the Hollywood Fantasy Draft we conducted recently. Please share your thoughts and any insights you have in the comments and don’t forget to visit her site!
Previous Pitches:
- Andrew Robinson’s “Untitled Joss Whedon Project“
- Anna’s “Truth and Lies”
- Next: Kai on Thursday
It’s time for me to pitch my movie ![]()
If you are not one of the bloggers who join Castor’s Hollywood Fantasy Draft, then you need to read my introduction first.
I never read a movie pitch before and following the example given by Castor ended up making me confused, so I decided to write it in my own style, the way I used to write my book or movie reviews. Do criticize me if it is not good.
My movie will be based upon a Manga by Chie Watari. The Manga was title Shiryo no Hanayome, I chose the last story in that manga, the title is Sunset Mistery, and change some of the characters’ names and their death sequence. The genre of this movie is Psychological Thriller.
Logline
7 people came into a big castle with maximum protection, one of them is the lawyer who sent them the invitation. One of the wealthiest men in the country will give them something for the good deeds they did for his family in the past. That ‘something’ is not what they think it is because their good deeds are actually their sins.
Synopsis
Nami Kaneda is invited by a lawyer who works for the late Sabro Helmest to come to his castle. The invitation is given to people who had helped Mr. Helmest in the past. He is planning to give them inheritance.
Nami is brought into a castle with high walls equipped with barb wire and lots of fierce guard dogs. Nami is very surprised to see all those protections. She is introduced to other guests, Dr. Samuel Byrne, head of a hospital, and his wife; Alex as well as Tony and Matt. All the guests are taken to see Mr. Helmest’s art collections, including his collection of torturing instruments and horrible wax statues.
On the first night, Alex dies in the same way as one of the wax statues. The next morning, a video by Mr. Helmest tells them that Alex had run over his mother. The police could not identify the driver but he had hired a detective to find the truth. Mr. Helmest tells them that the way Alex died is the perfect inheritance for her sin.
The next day, another person dies in a same horrible way. Nami remembers what had happened to her when she was still a kid. A young boy helped her from drowning. She was saved but the boy was killed. That boy was Helmest’s son. Is that why she received her invitation?
Who will survive from that horrible game whose mastermind is already dead? And who are the real perpetrators?
I have written the synopsis, now I will explain the character of each cast and why I pick them. Along with this explanation you will also know who the perpetrators are. These actors will be lined up based on the order of their appearance.
1. Yukie Nakama will play Nami Kaneda. Yukie has the perfect innocent face to play as Nami. Nami is a girl who has been living alone since her teen because her parents had passed away. She is a lonely but nice girl. She believes that no one inside that castle is the perpetrator. She believes that everyone is good. When she realizes her ‘sin’, she is trapped in a guilty feeling toward the boy who had helped her and decides to kill her self.
2. Ewan McGregor will play Ernest Reed, the lawyer. He is the one who sends the invitation to everyone involved in Mr Helmest’ will. I choose McGregor because he seems like a lawyer type. He is going to play the role where people might suspect him as someone involved in the killing spree, but in truth, he has no idea at all. He is also the victim of this game.
3. Kathy Bates will play Mrs. Johnson, the housemaid. I choose Kathy Bates for this role because she can pull this straight face as the mysterious housemaid. She will be the main suspect throughout the movie. She knows who does the killing but she herself doesn’t involve in the murdering process. She remains as the loyal housemaid before and after the death of Mr. Helmest.
4. Cillian Murphy will play Tony. Cillian is a great actor that can change into anyone he wants, he is the perfect one to play Tony because Tony is a man with many expressions. At the beginning he acts as surprise, confuse, and afraid as everybody else. He also suspects one of the guests. He is really nice to Nami. He even helps stopping Nami from killing herself. After seeing Nami’s suicide attempt, he starts to rethink all his action. He really care for her, it’s not a pretend act anymore. Before the end of the movie, he shows his real expression of hate toward everyone but he stops his own aunt from killing Nami.
5. Tom Hanks will play Dr. Byrne. Dr. Byrne is an arrogant and corrupt doctor. His main purpose of becoming a doctor is nothing but money, he has no compassion toward his patients. He is invited to the castle because of a malpractice done toward Mrs. Helmest. He was freed of all charges because he has people that protect him from the law. He is reluctant to fulfill the invitation but his new wife convinces him to come.
6. Nicole Kidman will play Mrs. Byrne. I choose Nicole because she is a great actress and I believe she can play this character really well. Nicole has to put 2 faces for her role. She married Dr. Byrne only for this purpose, to bring him to the castle. She has to act as arrogant as her husband, but she has to put a scared face and start distrusting everyone when the killing spree starts. In the end, she has to put her real expression of hate and distress because everyone in her family has passed away. She is actually Tony’s aunt.
7. Gaspard Ulliel will play as Matt. Matt was a gang member who often fought and bullied people. He had left that dark path of his life few years back. But during his reign in his gang, he and his brother once involved in a fight with a man and his brother stabbed the man. That man was left to die, he was Mr. Helmest’s Brother.
8. Noomi Rapace will play as Alex. Alex is a glamour woman whose line of work is prostitute for class people. Her sin is not prostitution, her sin is killing Mrs. Helmest.
9. Liam Neeson will play as Sabro Helmest. Although Mr. Helmest had planned this horrible act before he died, he does not need to be played by a horrible looking man. In manga itself, Mr. Helmest was drawn looking like a wise man and that’s why I choose Liam Neeson to play this role. Neeson will only play his role through video recorder.
Well…I’m going to close my movie pitch now. I guess you can pretty much guess how the story will go. Peter Jackson was chosen as the director because he is one of the best directors that can turn great book into great movie. I’m going to choose a screenwriter as well, it’s going to be Fran Walsh, her adaptation of The Lord Of The Rings is awesome, I’m talking as a TLoTR (book version) fan…and trust me, I’m very cruel in judging movies based on books that I like so much.
Now… will you watch this kind of psychological thriller?











17 Comments
I love how the great TOm Hanks has his name at the bottom of the billboard, but Cillian Murphy is on top of the title!
The film reads like a classic Agatha Christie story. Sounds very suspenseful and has a lot of potential for mystery and clever plot twists. I think the casting may be a bit off in some roles, though you chose some remarkable talent in the draft. Also, Peter Jackson ruined the wonderful Alice Sebold novel, so I would be hesitant to let him throw his massive ego into this mix.
Although I love Tom Hanks as much as I love Cillian Murphy, but for this movie, The young people rules. So, the great Tom Hanks only got supporting role.
I think he won’t mind since Cillian is also an amazing actor
I’d love to know which one do you think a bit off?
I thought hanks and Kidman were a bit off. Also, I love rapace, but not sure about her here. But that is just me…it’s your vision.
@Peter hehe I know, they seemed off together but Both are great actors, I believe they can pull it off. I like Rapace too, So I have faith she can be an arogant and bitchy girl, tho too bad she died 1st.
@Ruth Huahahaha I’m not gonna defend my self about being cliche with my movie and my main cast
As for Nakama Yukie, you can see her in Ring 0. She becomes the famous Sadako (the ghost) before she died and start haunting people.
I’m not surprised one bit considering this is Novia’s film
But I like Murphy far more than Hanks so no qualms from me here.
Yeah I got the Agatha Christie vibe as well, but I too don’t see Hanks and Kidman together, but considering they’re kinda a faux couple maybe that might work. I’ve never heard of miss Nakama so I can’t really comment on her casting.
I would like to see this movie! There is definitely a lot of potential for mystery and suspense and it could have an Hitcockian atmosphere. Interesting read
Thank you Castor.
I haven’t seen lots of good Hitcockian movies lately, it’s too bad because I love this type of movie a lot
So it’s And Then There Were None?
What’s the lawyer’s sin?
Otherwise, good post.
The lawyer is what I cosidered as collateral damage…he is used by Helmest family, because, how can you read will without lawyer?
The lawyer is a man caught in the wrong place at the wrong time
This is the sort of film I’d see. Sounds great, really intriguing; gripping set-up, nice pay-off.
Thank you Dan.
I kinda wish this will be made into real movie because I’m a sucker for this kind of thriller, especially if I can’t guess who the perpetrator is till the last minute
It’s like a cross between Agatha Christie and Saw! The right director would definitely make it work, and when Peter Jackson lets his dark side out it’s always interesting. And Tom Hanks doesn’t play bad guys very often, so that’s a cool twist.
Nice work, Novroz.
Thank you Richard.
Well, I haven’t seen Tom plays as an annoying person…I’d love to see him do that, I wanna be annoyed by him
I apologize for being M.I.A. for the past week or so…
Peter Jackson going delving into a psychological thriller sounds like an awesome idea. I can see it going down the same road as the Coen’s No Country where they stripped away their tongue-in-cheek humor and made a straight up thriller… Jackson’s campiness in his previous thriller/horror kept him from making anything that can be taken too seriously, but I do believe he has it in him to do so.
Likewise, I’d love to see Hanks in a darker role. He’s so often played ‘the good guy’, so it’d be awesome to see him play a compassionless doctor.
I dig your casting choices, though I might argue that there are one too many big stars in the film and that might distract viewers who can’t get over their public personas. However your choice to pit foreign actors with A-listing American actors seems very fitting. Personally I love films that play with cultural barriers, and putting it in the context of a psychological thriller ala a House on Haunted Hill scenario = yes.
Being unfamiliar with the source material, I can imagine that it’d make for an unconventional and darker film than most generic thrillers that Hollywood puts out. You may just be onto one of the most compelling films of the year!
I believe so too, He might be not good in the last 2 movies he directed but I still believe he still has ‘the thing’ inside him that can turn a good book into a great movie.
Hanks has this gentle face and I think that’s what make him often become ‘the good guy’ but he is a great actor and being compassionless will be easy for him and it’ll be interesting to watch.
Yeah I agree with you entirely, there are many big stars. When I chose my cast I still haven’t gotten any idea of the movie I want to pitch, half way through I figured it out from one of my favorite Manga, but the cast were already chosen. However, I hope they can deliver a performance that made people forget about their public persona…the problem is how are the producers going to pay them? lol
I always have a fascination over movie and stars from many country outside Hollywood…they are really good, often they are better than some famous Hollywood actors (famous not in term of great tallent).
Thank you so much for your nice compliment.
I like the idea of the movie and it makes me want to read the manga but the pitch I think wasn’t done that well. It kind of confused me in the sense that the relationships between the characters were found out after the synopsis, but I would watch this movie
Yeah I know, it’s not well done. This is my 1st time writing a movie pitch, I used to write book/movie reviews. When I write this, the style is still like a review rather than a pitch. I’ve read everyone’s pitch and I got a preety good idea how to write a pitch now
I’ll do a better pitch next time.
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